Feedback- Action Taken

One criticism that was mentioned from all the groups was that our opening sequence did not make sense. Having looked back at our opening sequence, we can see the confusion.
We used a POV shot for the ending of our sequence. This indicates that someone is watching+following Theos' character. We decided to add more POV shots during the rest of the sequence to make it more evident that someone is spying on him. We believe that this would solve our problem, as this gives our movie more of a story line.

Another criticism we had was Theos extended walk towards Mats character. There is nothing that we need to reshoot as we can simply edit some of the walking out. This also gives us an extra few seconds free to add any other shots we are planning on shooting.

Feedback- 7/02/13

Today we showed our rough edit to the class even if it was not finished. Our classmates gave us their opinions on shots they liked and what needed to be improved.

We received a lot of positive feedback for our rough cut:
"The last POV shot in the sequence was excellent and unique"
"Establishing shot was good"


We were also given constructive criticism:
"It didn't quite make sense"
"The walking part was too long"

From this information we will discuss how to improve the opening sequence and plan a reshoot schedule.